Hello? I'm Su Bin and I'm your owner.
I want to say sorry for not feeding you, and
I want to say sorry for dropping you all the time.
Since you are my first smartphone, I'll be more carefull.
You mean a lot to me, since you brought me to this camp.
You made me go to this camp because I wanted to get you!
My mother promised to give a brand-new smartphone(you) if I go to GLPS camp! and you are also my prize for doing well at the tests in school.
So if I look at you, I think of tests and this GLPS camp.
Although you make me think of tests, you are my first smartphone and I will think of you even if I get a new smartphone, and I promise to feed you well and I will not drop you
I wish I could get a smartphone for working at GLPS. :) I see how you feel sorry for your smartphone for not charging it and dropping it. What about elaborating on your experiences with your smartphone? You can talk about how it helped you wake up every morning at GLPS for example.
답글삭제Remember to capitalize the first letter of all your sentences. You are a good writer,and have good grammar - so try and challenge yourself to write more creatively. Personify your object as much as possible. This is a bit "surface level." All in all, good.
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