You! alarm! I don't like you!
You always wake me up!
I know that's an obviously good thing, but you're so annoying!
Can't you just turn off for just one second?
You're just annoying, and I can't sleep because you ring early and don't stop!
You finally stop ringing when I'm awake, and then I have to wash and eat right away!
I know the PAs and TAs chose you, but can't you just be broken? Just for one week?
If you turn off or be broken just for two or three days, I'll be really happy!
and you keep playing the same songs! It's boring!
From Sleepy Su Bin.
I see that you are very angry at the alarm that rings at 7am. Your emotions are well shown in this ode. You can also add what you do when the alarm starts to ring - covering your ears with pillows for example. If you hate the alarm that much try suggesting your opinion to the Broadcasting TA. :)
답글삭제Pretty good - but try and use some of the poetic devices I taught you guys. Alliteration would be effective to describe your annoyance: Your blatant buzzing blasts my ears with burdensome beeping.
답글삭제I also feel this is a bit short.